Senryu in the Snowstorm
#4
Thanks for reading and commenting guys. I suppose more traditionally it might read:

we loved early
and long --
past convenience

but I couldn't bear the punctuation.

Thanks,
Paul
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Senryu in the Snowstorm - by Tiger the Lion - 03-14-2017, 02:51 PM
RE: Senryu in the Snowstorm - by Wjames - 03-16-2017, 04:41 PM
RE: Senryu in the Snowstorm - by RiverNotch - 03-17-2017, 12:15 AM
RE: Senryu in the Snowstorm - by Tiger the Lion - 03-17-2017, 02:06 AM



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