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Each choice is defensible. It comes down to a subjective feel of what works best. Once you've allowed for reversing time she can resemble any profession you (the speaker) likes really.

To the train conductor thing yeah that's why it needed medley. Which weighs it down a little though plays off the food to an extent.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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