The ashes
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I really feel privileged to be on a forum with so many gifted writers.The story is very well written and believable, seems a clear scene someone actually experienced. I wondered for a moment if sailors could be without a knife, but then we wouldn't have read such an opened imagination of cleverness if they had. Thanks so much for the read.
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The ashes - by just mercedes - 03-15-2017, 04:29 AM
RE: The ashes - by Achebe - 03-15-2017, 06:28 AM
RE: The ashes - by just mercedes - 03-15-2017, 06:31 AM
RE: The ashes - by ellajam - 03-15-2017, 07:55 AM
RE: The ashes - by just mercedes - 03-15-2017, 08:42 AM
RE: The ashes - by nibbed - 03-15-2017, 10:15 AM
RE: The ashes - by RiverNotch - 03-15-2017, 10:39 AM
RE: The ashes - by just mercedes - 03-15-2017, 10:43 AM
RE: The ashes - by just mercedes - 07-04-2017, 08:58 AM
RE: The ashes - by just mercedes - 07-26-2017, 06:26 AM
RE: The ashes - by Todd - 07-26-2017, 06:27 AM
RE: The ashes - by ellajam - 07-26-2017, 06:32 AM
RE: The ashes - by just mercedes - 07-26-2017, 07:45 AM



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