03-14-2017, 10:20 AM
(03-14-2017, 04:15 AM)AttnAttack Wrote: the owner’s manual says
change the oil every five thousand miles
high octane, unleaded fuel only
tire reads thirty-two pounds of pressure
check the treads every time you drive
doesn’t care anything about This line is confusing for me. What is it that doesn't care about anything? The first time I read through it, I though you meant yourself, then I thought it was the owner's manual. If it was the owner's manual that you were referring to, I think keeping the title as "Owner's Manual" would have been best.
leaky trunks
rainwater
my neglect
rusting
jack and iron
tire blew out on the interstate
tow trucks don’t come at three AM This line made me smile
the owner’s manual says a great many things
about preventive care and routine maintenance
but it will not say
how to love your car And another smile. I love the ending!
Quote:EDIT: Changed line 4 from "keep tire pressure around thirty-two", removed description of the poem, changed title from "Owner's Manual"
