03-14-2017, 08:44 AM
Put up a second edit, gave that rhyming finish another shot, redirected some of the momentum out of the ends of some stanzas, and other smaller edits. Please give it a look!
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The Nuisance of Heart
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The Nuisance of Heart - by baifan - 03-13-2017, 03:50 PM
RE: The Nuisance of Heart - by ellajam - 03-13-2017, 07:16 PM
RE: The Nuisance of Heart - by Todd - 03-14-2017, 01:39 AM
RE: The Nuisance of Heart - by baifan - 03-14-2017, 03:51 AM
RE: The Nuisance of Heart - by Todd - 03-14-2017, 05:37 AM
RE: The Nuisance of Heart - by baifan - 03-14-2017, 08:44 AM
RE: The Nuisance of Heart - by Todd - 03-15-2017, 01:24 AM
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