january

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I don't have much to add, other than I enjoyed the vulgarness and stream of consciousness style. One of the purposes of poetry is to transport you into the mind of another, and view their world through the written word. In this way, you succeeded at the climax, because while I can see the frustration and banality present through the writings, it isn't until you say "pine needles, fucking everywhere" that I am truly empathetic towards the speaker.

kudos, well done. Keep transportation in mind when writing more poetry!