Good Times

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Hi Caleb. It's never too late.
I like the 4th stanza best.
Maybe because I can relate.
Why is youthfulness a curse?

I searched for the five words.

I liked the last line, too.

I get on rabbit trails from other people's words, sometimes.
When you said your account hasn't been canceled
I thought of Johnny Cash singing
The Old Account, and went and listened to him on youtube.
He was a fine poet, too.
I could never figure out why he always wore black, though.

I clicked the link to your forum.
It looks very nice.
Your graphics look very nice, too.
I think you will do very well!
Please limit posts in the workshops to discussion of the poem. We have a PM system for chat about other topics. Thanks, ella/admin

Thank you for teaching me
& showing me an example of rhythmic free verse.
I hope I learn more about pentameter and tetrameter,
but I must be willing to fast in order to learn
and I just ate half a spaghetti squash, so not today.

I hope you find plenty of joy and sunshine!