Eyes

[operadiva]

I like the concept, its very easy to relate to. I agree with previous comments about more detail. Even though the reader might not be experiencing the same demons, the fact that the speaker opens up shows a level of vulnerability and honesty that allows the reader to substitute their demons and share the experience. Just a thought. I like the struggle of temptation and regret that seems to be going on. 

Thank you for sharing
Operadiva