03-09-2017, 07:54 AM
Caleb Murdock- Thanks for the second look and consideration.
I see what you are saying, it is exclusive, but couldn't be helped
during the flow. I will see if I can make it more understandable.
Thank you.
Achebe & Lizzie-
I tend to do better with Prose and short stories.
Seems I need to add something, though.
False guilt is nothing new to man,
I just figured WE ALL had our bouts
and it would be easily understood.
Perhaps I tend to be overly dramatic.
I will try to consider all these wonderful helps in my revision(s)
Thank you kindly.
I see what you are saying, it is exclusive, but couldn't be helped
during the flow. I will see if I can make it more understandable.
Thank you.
Achebe & Lizzie-
I tend to do better with Prose and short stories.
Seems I need to add something, though.
False guilt is nothing new to man,
I just figured WE ALL had our bouts
and it would be easily understood.
Perhaps I tend to be overly dramatic.
I will try to consider all these wonderful helps in my revision(s)
Thank you kindly.
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