03-06-2017, 10:25 AM
Thanks, Dale, I'll consider those points when I edit, which I have to, maybe with a machete. 
I could say joy in life, but risqué I think has become part of the English language. I was looking for a different tone in the second part but that doesn't mean it's working. Much appreciate the read and comments.
I could say joy in life, but risqué I think has become part of the English language. I was looking for a different tone in the second part but that doesn't mean it's working. Much appreciate the read and comments.
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