A Girl Through The Glass (edit #2.2)

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Thanks so much Leanne, that bum line is a new one, I guess I didn't think it through. I'm sure I can fix it, much obliged. I'll think on "move on", I can probably do better.

Ah, the retrements, very solid crit here. I'm always unsure about whether the varitity readers seem to like is worth the trade off. It will be fun for me to try to put this right.

Thanks for the read, Leanne.