03-03-2017, 10:45 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys its been very helpful. Hopefully I can find some time to dish out an edited version. Todd you referred to the phrase "gods of Baal" to be honest I was struggling here to put the line in iambic pentameter so that is why it is the way it is. I still think its okay even though your right Baal was only a god rather a pantheon, but since he was the most important god in the canaanite pantheon I thought "the gods of Baal" still makes sense just like "the gods of Zeus" makes a degree of sense since he is the high god of that pantheon but I might need to rethink this a bit.
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Mark Nepo
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