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Between You and I

just mercedes
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03-02-2017, 04:49 PM

(03-02-2017, 04:03 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Between You and I

the canyon is grand.

Let's hush
and not look up.

I really like this. Your punctuation could be trimmed but the response to raw nature is very human.

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Between You and I - by Tiger the Lion - 03-02-2017, 04:03 PM

RE: Between You and I - by just mercedes - 03-02-2017, 04:49 PM

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