january

[litQueen]

snow covers my walk to school

like a nun covers cleavage. winter The first time around reading this line I had to go back and reread it to make sure I read it properly... It seemed out of place then, but the more I read it, the more it fits. It's a bit blunt and that fits well.

is nothing new, she’s been stuck

in my head for months,

(fuck mariah carey) 

the world is a numb white,

and so are my hands -

just as we forget what green

looks like, the feeling in our

skin falls frozen off the bone.

december is a cold-hearted

bitch, dolled up in ornaments,

wrapping paper, adolescent

laughter, empty wallets.  the empty wallets is strange here, because i still think you're saying december is "dolled up in empty wallets"

jesus celebrates his

two-thousandth odd

birthday, and it’s clear

that under all of december’s

ugly-girl make up is just "ugly girl make up" Love this

pine needles. fucking everywhere.

I really liked this! There is an apathetic and hateful/crude tone to it that really comes through. I like the lack of capitalization on the proper nouns... Adds to the overall vibe of "fuck this shit". Interesting take on the whiteness of snow and winter... I personally love it when it's all white from a fresh snowfall; the world is quieter and more peaceful to me, so it's interesting to be opened up to that other perspective. 
Thanks for sharing!