02-27-2017, 12:27 AM
i do lol that you, liz, commented on the two pieces i think were written at the time i was dipped in Dickinson. so yeah, this is me channeling Dickinson, and probably failing, since the compilation i had was one of those edited by her contemporaries, and the way they arranged her works obscured how connected she actually was to the physical world (something i only got when i decided to sing her songs like a madman as we hiked down a mountain this one time). it's been so long, though --- either i've been separated enough to rewrite this, or separated enough to not care about discarding. i guess we'll see. thanks for the feedback!

