02-26-2017, 04:03 AM
I liked it a lot until I read the critiques!
It can be worked.
Please let me keep the original picture, though.
bees harvest pollen this is a picture of someone doing their job
from apple blossoms in bloom-- here's the redundancy I did not see for the cuteness of it all
need more honey pots rewards for hard work should be good, but there's a need
perhaps, "gather apple blossom dew"?
but it's your poem, not mine <3
It can be worked.
Please let me keep the original picture, though.
bees harvest pollen this is a picture of someone doing their job
from apple blossoms in bloom-- here's the redundancy I did not see for the cuteness of it all
need more honey pots rewards for hard work should be good, but there's a need
perhaps, "gather apple blossom dew"?
but it's your poem, not mine <3
there's always a better reason to love