january

[muteyy]

I really enjoyed reading through this poem. The humor is definitely something that attracted me to it. There was a few points to touch up, as I believe someone said before, there is no need to restate the same thing you already implied in a prior line. I think this poem has a lot of potential, and I definitely enjoyed the read, and the laugh. I understand why some may be confused with the "she" in the 3rd line of the 1st stanza, however I understood it immediately. Haha. It may need a little rework, so others may not have to ask that question, however, I enjoyed this thoroughly, and I hope you continue to write and work on this piece!