Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 2.1)

Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 2.1)

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02-25-2017, 12:01 AM

Lizzie, some good catches and notes. I could 14 syllables too on that one line. Let me make some slight adjustments.

Appreciate the read.

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Todd

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Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 2.1) - by Todd - 02-19-2017, 04:04 PM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines - by CRNDLSM - 02-20-2017, 01:12 AM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines - by Todd - 02-20-2017, 11:35 PM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines - by Donald Q. - 02-20-2017, 11:45 PM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines - by Todd - 02-20-2017, 11:57 PM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines - by Lizzie - 02-22-2017, 07:08 AM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines - by Todd - 02-22-2017, 12:46 PM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1) - by Todd - 02-22-2017, 03:45 PM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1) - by Achebe - 02-22-2017, 09:45 PM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1.1) - by Todd - 02-23-2017, 02:14 AM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1.1) - by Donald Q. - 02-23-2017, 04:16 AM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1.1) - by Todd - 02-23-2017, 04:30 AM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1.1) - by Todd - 02-23-2017, 06:47 AM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1.1) - by Donald Q. - 02-23-2017, 07:00 AM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1.1) - by Todd - 02-23-2017, 03:55 PM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1.1) - by Lizzie - 02-24-2017, 04:03 PM

RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1.1) - by Todd - 02-25-2017, 12:01 AM

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