Aubade for the Bipolar

[Leanne]

The morning is for Rachmaninoff and bees, -- the sounds, the intense movement, the excitement -- yes!
and the soft steps of pollened feet,

as black separates from white. -- I like this idea but I don't think the image is strong enough.  Some personification perhaps?  Like black stepping out of white or something.

The sun is a bronze chime
and half the bed shivers. -- shivers gives the vibration sense but I'd really like something that was both movement and sound here

In the copper glow,
the dew on the leaf 

is a dappled darkness. -- this is gorgeous, like a negative rainbow.