02-23-2017, 03:55 PM
(02-23-2017, 07:00 AM)Donald Q. Wrote: Woo! Good shit.Thank you Donald. I made a few very slight changes not worthy of calling it a revision. I think the echo line and the last one may sell me on making the syllable version the version.
EDIT: Some nice additions in here actaully
Mmm,
The collapsing echoes is v good
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
