Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 2.1)
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(02-23-2017, 07:00 AM)Donald Q. Wrote:  Woo! Good shit.


EDIT: Some nice additions in here actaully




Mmm,
The collapsing echoes is v good
Thank you Donald. I made a few very slight changes not worthy of calling it a revision. I think the echo line and the last one may sell me on making the syllable version the version.
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RE: Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 1.1) - by Todd - 02-23-2017, 03:55 PM



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