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Sometimes, a star is born
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02-23-2017, 10:27 AM
I prefer it as is, flies is a strong break and splat as a first word stopper seems a successful enjambment for me. Thanks for the bump, Lizzie, still as much fun this time around
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Sometimes, a star is born - by Achebe - 06-03-2016, 03:50 PM
RE: Sometimes, a star is born - by ellajam - 06-03-2016, 08:33 PM
RE: Sometimes, a star is born - by RiverNotch - 06-04-2016, 08:17 PM
RE: Sometimes, a star is born - by Achebe - 06-04-2016, 08:23 PM
RE: Sometimes, a star is born - by RiverNotch - 06-04-2016, 08:31 PM
RE: Sometimes, a star is born - by ellajam - 06-04-2016, 09:08 PM
RE: Sometimes, a star is born - by Lizzie - 02-22-2017, 05:36 AM
RE: Sometimes, a star is born - by Achebe - 02-23-2017, 06:08 AM
RE: Sometimes, a star is born - by ellajam - 02-23-2017, 10:27 AM
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