Growing Up with Cerebral Palsy Revision 4

[Todd]

I appreciate all the critiques. They helped clarify much of this piece for me. I take a long time to do proper rewrites so I'm mainly posting this to let those who commented know that yes I do eventually get around to updating the poems. Mostly the critiques are just good to read and reflect upon whether I take any of the advice or not. The thinking is the important part. I still have some things to work out on this one but again more thinking required.

thank you all again.