02-21-2017, 01:58 AM
Thanks for the reply! I posted this one because I was having trouble conveying a message. The poem is representing someone who is beginning something new, or trying to get their foot in the door. I used the boat to symbolize the journey and how when we discover more in what were trying it can change the sense of direction. I agree with grander comment.
I will revise it and see how it can make it more clear.
I will revise it and see how it can make it more clear.

