The Turn of a Knob
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Thanks for the reply! I posted this one because I was having trouble conveying a message. The poem is representing someone who is beginning something new, or trying to get their foot in the door. I used the boat to symbolize the journey and how when we discover more in what were trying it can change the sense of direction. I agree with grander comment. 

I will revise it and see how it can make it more clear.
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The Turn of a Knob - by JasonM. - 02-19-2017, 02:46 PM
RE: The Turn of a Knob - by Achebe - 02-19-2017, 10:08 PM
RE: The Turn of a Knob - by Donald Q. - 02-19-2017, 11:36 PM
RE: The Turn of a Knob - by JasonM. - 02-21-2017, 01:58 AM
RE: The Turn of a Knob - by homer1950 - 02-21-2017, 02:38 PM



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