Revisionist History and Time Machines (Rev 2.1)

[CRNDLSM]

People only tell you they’ll go back I think you're trying to take one of the most overused hypotheticals and make it new, and the elevator tidbit as a form of revisionist history is a revelation for me personally, I laughed at loud, it's my favorite thing in here
to kill Hitler, but that’s not why 
elevators no longer skip 
the thirteenth floor. Christ
no longer split the horizon
on that day. The blood no longer comparing christ and Hitler in this subject can't be avoided, they're the two big hitters, nice imagery though
falling from His face like rain.
Why kill a German artist
with an above average appreciation
of the human form? Memory
is chalk scratched on a dark board, only I get the metaphor, but I don't get the side-effect, memory is a side effect of wiping the dark board chalk that is real events? A history lesson in class, that we have to remember, revisionist history, but like a child not drowning? 
to be wiped away—a side effect,
like the child not drowned
in Crystal Lake.Jason? The movie idea based on a real event revised for entertainment purposes?  

Barry and Claudette lie on a bed
of dry pine needles. This scene followed by crystal lake reference mixed with the axe mention, seems like the real life murder near crystal lake that sparked the idea for the movie, sparking your comparison to Hitler christ and all of revisionist history.
Her back arches like the blade
of an axe.

Even though for the most part I like everything you're saying here, I'm unable to get away from the Jason movies, and think it cheeses the subject matter.  Not sure how to help, here, less christ and Hitler, more Jason? But then how could the axe scene be more hitting?  I'm sorry if I completely missed your points,