on concrete and hippies

on concrete and hippies

Achebe Offline

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02-19-2017, 06:52 PM

It starts well, but I struggle it make sense of it afterwards. I'm sure with enough effort some story will emerge, but you lose my interest before drawing me in fully.
I also find the word spacing gimmicky.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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on concrete and hippies - by Lizzie - 02-19-2017, 04:52 AM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by canofworms - 02-19-2017, 07:45 AM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by Achebe - 02-19-2017, 06:52 PM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by Quixilated - 02-19-2017, 08:25 PM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by Lizzie - 02-20-2017, 03:38 PM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by Erthona - 02-21-2017, 08:49 AM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by Lizzie - 02-22-2017, 01:37 AM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by canofworms - 02-22-2017, 01:53 AM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by nibbed - 03-11-2017, 04:01 AM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by Lizzie - 03-11-2017, 07:11 AM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 05:36 AM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by Lizzie - 05-12-2017, 05:40 AM

RE: on concrete and hippies - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 08:34 AM

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