haiku:
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dope poem. good combination of opposites. the image of the blossoms blowing away is age-old haiku jargon for the bittersweet feeling of change, but the image of the goat being tethered is so pragmatic and atypical--if you chased after your hat you'd risk losing something far more important.

What a funny hat!
The bird bath
covered in snow.
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haiku: - by billy - 12-15-2011, 03:52 AM
RE: haiku: - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 02:50 PM
RE: haiku: - by just mercedes - 02-17-2017, 03:28 PM
RE: haiku: - by CRNDLSM - 02-17-2017, 09:59 PM
RE: haiku: - by amaril - 02-18-2017, 04:05 AM
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