02-18-2017, 04:05 AM
dope poem. good combination of opposites. the image of the blossoms blowing away is age-old haiku jargon for the bittersweet feeling of change, but the image of the goat being tethered is so pragmatic and atypical--if you chased after your hat you'd risk losing something far more important.
What a funny hat!
The bird bath
covered in snow.
What a funny hat!
The bird bath
covered in snow.

