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caroline
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02-16-2017, 11:36 PM
I took the first line to mean silkscreen, the printing method, and that worked for me, if that's what you meant it's one word. For me the last line added nothing, I agree the poem would be stonger without it.
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caroline - by canofworms - 02-16-2017, 01:37 PM
RE: caroline - by Lizzie - 02-16-2017, 03:08 PM
RE: caroline - by Achebe - 02-16-2017, 05:20 PM
RE: caroline - by canofworms - 02-17-2017, 02:01 AM
RE: caroline - by Achebe - 02-17-2017, 05:25 AM
RE: caroline - by canofworms - 02-18-2017, 08:30 AM
RE: caroline - by ellajam - 02-16-2017, 11:36 PM
RE: caroline - by canofworms - 02-18-2017, 04:52 AM
RE: caroline - by amaril - 02-18-2017, 05:21 AM
RE: caroline - by ellajam - 02-18-2017, 08:37 AM
RE: caroline - by Achebe - 02-18-2017, 10:26 AM
RE: caroline - by ellajam - 02-18-2017, 12:24 PM
RE: caroline - by canofworms - 02-18-2017, 01:14 PM
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