Poetry in Real Time #5
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This is gorgeous, Tiger. Smile

(03-04-2016, 04:55 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  It’s beautiful outside; -- not loving 'beautiful' -- it's too vague. Could mean practically anything.
mild for March.
 
I’m in pajamas, sipping coffee
and watching
 
snowflakes the size of dinner-plate doilies -- love this line
fall slower than gravity ought to allow,
and watching -- I agree with Keith about the two watchings
 
my little white beagle
endeavour
to catch them all.
 
He’s been at it since dawn.
 
Should I be calling him in?
or is he calling me out? -- dynamite ending
Thanks for sharing!

Lizzie
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Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Tiger the Lion - 03-04-2016, 04:55 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Keith - 03-04-2016, 05:09 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Tiger the Lion - 03-04-2016, 05:19 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Julius - 03-05-2016, 06:36 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Tiger the Lion - 03-07-2016, 03:23 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Lizzie - 02-13-2017, 03:45 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Tiger the Lion - 02-15-2017, 02:14 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by canofworms - 02-16-2017, 02:41 PM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by ellajam - 05-10-2017, 09:36 PM



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