Crossing the Sea (Edit #1)
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For me now the N is speaking, unfondly, of a parent. S1 seems to describe the power of a parent to form, or scar, their child, S2 the acknowledgement that it is a lasting relationship, a connection that cannot be broken even by choice and S3 is survival, the river smaller compared to the sea.

Or maybe I just spent too much time with my mother this week. Hysterical
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Crossing the Sea (Edit #1) - by UselessBlueprint - 02-03-2017, 03:23 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by Donald Q. - 02-03-2017, 07:18 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by ellajam - 02-03-2017, 08:20 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by UselessBlueprint - 02-04-2017, 02:12 AM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by Achebe - 02-04-2017, 05:41 AM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by Lizzie - 02-07-2017, 11:50 AM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by UselessBlueprint - 02-07-2017, 12:34 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by CRNDLSM - 02-12-2017, 08:04 AM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by ellajam - 02-12-2017, 09:04 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea (Edit #1) - by Lizzie - 02-13-2017, 04:12 AM



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