First Date (revised)

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First Date (revised)

Lizzie Offline

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02-12-2017, 01:30 PM

Hi Caleb. I don't know if I'd call it 'inappropriate'. It doesn't seem crass.

The story makes me feel sadness. The end line seems like a statement of empathy.

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First Date (revised) - by Caleb Murdock - 02-12-2017, 12:39 PM

RE: First Date - by Lizzie - 02-12-2017, 01:30 PM

RE: First Date - by Caleb Murdock - 02-12-2017, 01:35 PM

RE: First Date - by Achebe - 02-12-2017, 02:33 PM

RE: First Date - by Caleb Murdock - 02-12-2017, 03:05 PM

RE: First Date - by Achebe - 02-12-2017, 04:15 PM

RE: First Date - by Caleb Murdock - 02-12-2017, 08:31 PM

RE: First Date - by CRNDLSM - 02-12-2017, 11:50 PM

RE: First Date - by Caleb Murdock - 02-13-2017, 05:54 AM

RE: First Date - by tectak - 02-13-2017, 07:33 PM

RE: First Date - by Caleb Murdock - 02-13-2017, 08:33 PM

RE: First Date - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 09:55 AM

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