02-10-2017, 09:58 PM
I really appreciate the feedback, Donald. You are right about me trying to fit the meter, and that line is a bit awkward. It was originally titled "The Puppet Show", but I decided to go with the current one because I kind of saw it as a photograph or a painting of sorts, with the title conveying what it was, but also having some layers underneath (if that makes sense). I can definitely see how I just shuttle out the cosmic issues so quickly, so I'll go back and see what I can do. Thanks so much! you were a huge help.