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Fetal (3rd edit)
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02-10-2017, 12:53 PM
Well, it seems you're stuck on the interjection. Exclaiming 'jesus!' Is a pretty common reaxtion, it can also have negative context and exasperation, you were right to change it, but 'and how' sound like an infomercial. I would like to offer suggestions, like why a word at all? Symbols representing, maybe an obscure foreign language, it's a good piece!
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Fetal (3rd edit) - by laltieri0 - 04-18-2016, 10:36 AM
RE: Fetal (2nd edit) - by zorcas - 10-07-2016, 07:08 AM
RE: Fetal (2nd edit) - by laltieri0 - 02-09-2017, 02:05 AM
RE: Fetal (2nd edit) - by CRNDLSM - 02-10-2017, 12:53 PM
RE: Fetal (2nd edit) - by laltieri0 - 02-11-2017, 12:15 AM
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