Higher Still

[kylede87]

I understand where you're trying to go with this poem, but some of your sentence structures, rhyme schemes, and enjambment techniques don't work too well. Thankfully, the first stanza is really the only one that's not that good. The rest of the poem isn't bad. I would fix "All we know, is we must grow". These lines are just awkward, and the rhyme scheme sounds forced. If you could fix that, that would be a huge step.