think of all the baby plants that sprout.

[Keith]

Hi Can of
Just a couple of pet hates for me to start, capitalised lines and using the first line as your title, don't really work and detract for me. I like the image as it grows, firmly planting its toes, I think in such a short piece you can take time to open up some of the lines make the image clearer and help the reader take a break from the well placed alliteration. some notes below.

Think of all the baby plants that sproutchoose as title or first line but not both
From seeds soft soil slumber. this doesn't really make sense you need some fill words to help the reader.
Their lone limb lists and leans.  a nice image but I'm L'ed out here just a touch too much
An awkward and unpracticed reach to the sun, the rain. 
While roots wrap round fast to mother's breast  the soil, nice image and twist
with primate tendril toes.  Nice close bringing out the nurture nature side of the poem

A enjoyable poem and topic, I would space out some of the sonics as they become over powering without a break, but all said you have a neat little poem here that wont take much fixing up. Best Keith

Ooops just spotted this is in Misc so I've probably over cooked the broth. sorry if this was not the kind of feedback you were looking for, but you can always ignore me, I have thick skin good luck with your poem which ever path you choose.