02-08-2017, 02:53 AM
(02-07-2017, 02:35 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: When I make you laughTiger, a very enjoyable piece.
time stops.
fear drops
its empirical drawers
and I rejoice.
Makes me smile.
My quibble is over the word, 'empirical.' Fear overrides reason; fear makes people behave like animals, not scientists. Unless you're using that word in a way I'm not familiar with, that bit doesn't quite sit right.
The rest I love.