02-08-2017, 12:39 AM
(02-06-2017, 08:21 PM)Achebe Wrote: Children play
in the slanting light
of wish fulfilment dreams. for me, it's not that this line is too clinical (although come to think of it...), but that "wish-fulfillment dreams" becomes redundant when the subtler meaning of dream is considered here, which for this piece is a meaning i take to be quite useful.
Perhaps going away
into the night
is not what it seems. but the rest is gorgeous!