Crossing the Sea (Edit #1)
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@DonaldQ Writhing is certainly too fast. Duly noted. Changing soon. The finaly two lines are ambiguous indeed, and not by design. Original drafts were clearer, but I lost some clarity while shortening those lines. Adjusting this as well.

@ellajam Kinda. But I'm really not that clever, so it shouldn't be too hard Wink I'll grab some coffee too and see if I can figure it out.
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Crossing the Sea (Edit #1) - by UselessBlueprint - 02-03-2017, 03:23 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by Donald Q. - 02-03-2017, 07:18 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by ellajam - 02-03-2017, 08:20 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by UselessBlueprint - 02-04-2017, 02:12 AM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by Achebe - 02-04-2017, 05:41 AM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by Lizzie - 02-07-2017, 11:50 AM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by UselessBlueprint - 02-07-2017, 12:34 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by CRNDLSM - 02-12-2017, 08:04 AM
RE: Crossing the Sea - by ellajam - 02-12-2017, 09:04 PM
RE: Crossing the Sea (Edit #1) - by Lizzie - 02-13-2017, 04:12 AM



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