02-03-2017, 04:23 AM
Hi Scribner,
I liked the poem and the repetition worked very well to keep the reader focused on the main theme. It gave a good sense of continuity.
I would agree, though, that it could be a lot shorter.
Overall, a long and engaging poem.
I liked the poem and the repetition worked very well to keep the reader focused on the main theme. It gave a good sense of continuity.
I would agree, though, that it could be a lot shorter.
Overall, a long and engaging poem.