01-31-2017, 01:11 PM
I mean that "that" isn't a great word to end a line on, imo. I might be missing on the fancy stuff your doing with the soft/hard etc. It's a trifecta of bad if you will, that makes it week. It's not workable slant rhyme, "that" is an uninteresting word, and it is a bad choice for a line break. (all opinions).
Do you think that keeping people out of your country(regardless of the method) is the same as imprisoning or killing them(regardless of the method) Seriously what is the most fascist thing that trump as done and how does it compare to what horrible people like Hitler and Stalin have done. I think it pales in comparison. Honestly. Mean, foolish, short sighted, ignorant, arrogant. Dangerous. Sure. Ok, i give you that. But fascist... i think that is over-reach, which is why the poem seems over-done. I appreciate the back and forth, not trying to be rude.
Do you think that keeping people out of your country(regardless of the method) is the same as imprisoning or killing them(regardless of the method) Seriously what is the most fascist thing that trump as done and how does it compare to what horrible people like Hitler and Stalin have done. I think it pales in comparison. Honestly. Mean, foolish, short sighted, ignorant, arrogant. Dangerous. Sure. Ok, i give you that. But fascist... i think that is over-reach, which is why the poem seems over-done. I appreciate the back and forth, not trying to be rude.