Red, White, and You
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Quite a rant, Smile, I found it fast-moving and fairly easy to get through to the end on first read. Sorry I don't have time for a full crit but I will tomorrow, I just want to let you know not all readers have the same response as the ones above.
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Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 01-31-2017, 08:17 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by QDeathstar - 01-31-2017, 08:52 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 01-31-2017, 11:06 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by Donald Q. - 01-31-2017, 09:19 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by ellajam - 01-31-2017, 10:57 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by QDeathstar - 01-31-2017, 12:01 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 01-31-2017, 12:40 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by QDeathstar - 01-31-2017, 01:11 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 01-31-2017, 02:25 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by Donald Q. - 01-31-2017, 08:22 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 02-01-2017, 02:27 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by RiverNotch - 02-01-2017, 11:11 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by ellajam - 02-07-2017, 03:32 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by spiritthebrave - 05-29-2017, 04:29 AM



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