Red, White, and You
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(01-31-2017, 08:17 AM)mrweiner Wrote:  Fascism? This again?
My feelings when I read this poem. 





In all seriousness, this poem is a bit patronising and overreaching. I would perhaps recommend focusing on something less nebulous. 
Why not start smaller, write a poem about flags specifically? Sorry if this seems unhelpful, I just feel this is the wrong approach to take to a political poem.
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Messages In This Thread
Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 01-31-2017, 08:17 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by QDeathstar - 01-31-2017, 08:52 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 01-31-2017, 11:06 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by Donald Q. - 01-31-2017, 09:19 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by ellajam - 01-31-2017, 10:57 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by QDeathstar - 01-31-2017, 12:01 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 01-31-2017, 12:40 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by QDeathstar - 01-31-2017, 01:11 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 01-31-2017, 02:25 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by Donald Q. - 01-31-2017, 08:22 PM
RE: Red, White, and You - by mrweiner - 02-01-2017, 02:27 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by RiverNotch - 02-01-2017, 11:11 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by ellajam - 02-07-2017, 03:32 AM
RE: Red, White, and You - by spiritthebrave - 05-29-2017, 04:29 AM



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