Sal[i]vation

[kolemath]

Sal[i]vation


God's taste on dramatic irony dictates
that though the world shall be destroyed by fire, - I like the meaning even if the language is clunky
first floods of water formed by melting ice
should drown the coast and river valley towns. - great sound and words
And if those liberal citizens complain,
those baby-hatin', free-lovemakin' fags,-a little confused if the are complaints by them or insults to them.. Obviously the latter after a close reading but putting lib. Closer to the insults would clear that up
then all the more should hosts of angels laugh
while country voters roast Christ's paradise.-country voter is weak compared to the lib line..Maybe you're going for that

The poem cycles through the same logic twice which captures the lifecycles of earth..Which may not fit the linear logic of the Bible but..It works for me