01-26-2017, 07:00 AM
Fun read. I like Jason's idea of swapping S3/S4.
"Took off my mirror swiping a mailbox":
I like the line but the meter is a bit wonky for me.
A lightweight crit for mild but it read beautifully for me, if I come up with anything else I'll pipe up. Thanks for posting, I enjoyed it.
"Took off my mirror swiping a mailbox":
I like the line but the meter is a bit wonky for me.
A lightweight crit for mild but it read beautifully for me, if I come up with anything else I'll pipe up. Thanks for posting, I enjoyed it.
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