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On Cats - Edit 2
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01-24-2017, 09:22 AM
I'll get to your feedback as soon as I can. The piece is actually about being tentative of new love, and likening my relationship with her to the relationship with the cat that she is being compared to in the metaphor. Not sure if I need to make this more clear or leave it ambiguous.
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On Cats - Edit 2 - by mrweiner - 01-23-2017, 10:16 AM
RE: On Cats - by CRNDLSM - 01-23-2017, 10:41 PM
RE: On Cats - by mrweiner - 01-24-2017, 02:22 AM
RE: On Cats - by Donald Q. - 01-24-2017, 08:24 AM
RE: On Cats - by mrweiner - 01-24-2017, 09:22 AM
RE: On Cats - by rollingbrianjones - 01-24-2017, 12:44 PM
RE: On Cats - by mrweiner - 01-25-2017, 02:02 AM
RE: On Cats - Edit 2 - by rollingbrianjones - 01-26-2017, 11:41 AM
RE: On Cats - Edit 2 - by mrweiner - 01-26-2017, 04:02 PM
RE: On Cats - Edit 2 - by RC James - 01-30-2017, 09:44 AM
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