Pirithous and the Hidden Muse
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I read it through several times, not even worrying about the meaning, just feeling the pace and the beat, and I loved it like I love a piece of music. So, I hope you do revise, but not at the expense of that flow that I love!!! Because it's my piece and I get to make all of your decisions. tongueincheek
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Pirithous and the Hidden Muse - by RiverNotch - 01-14-2017, 12:02 AM
RE: Pirithous and the Hidden Muse - by Lizzie - 01-18-2017, 06:53 AM
RE: Pirithous and the Hidden Muse - by RiverNotch - 01-20-2017, 01:46 PM
RE: Pirithous and the Hidden Muse - by Lizzie - 01-20-2017, 01:49 PM
RE: Pirithous and the Hidden Muse - by RiverNotch - 01-23-2017, 02:09 PM
RE: Pirithous and the Hidden Muse - by RiverNotch - 02-01-2017, 11:30 AM
RE: Pirithous and the Hidden Muse - by Donald Q. - 02-03-2017, 09:40 AM
RE: Pirithous and the Hidden Muse - by RiverNotch - 02-03-2017, 10:55 AM



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