01-20-2017, 01:46 PM
"This reads like a dream"
i kinda think the first section does, but the second stumbles a lot. i might revise the second section pre-feedback, both to clarify its meaning and to make it conform to a structure. thanks for the consideration!
i kinda think the first section does, but the second stumbles a lot. i might revise the second section pre-feedback, both to clarify its meaning and to make it conform to a structure. thanks for the consideration!