01-19-2017, 12:06 PM
[quote='CRNDLSM' pid='222966' dateline='1484794548']
I'd switch 2 and 3, the girls, leads to the prostitute, leads to the police and total crime, leads to how tourists must feel, leads back to how you feel
Yup, 100% agree. Quite an obvious revision too. but I was totally blind to it until you said!
Exactly why I posted... thanks
I'd switch 2 and 3, the girls, leads to the prostitute, leads to the police and total crime, leads to how tourists must feel, leads back to how you feel
Yup, 100% agree. Quite an obvious revision too. but I was totally blind to it until you said!
Exactly why I posted... thanks
RBJ
Man differs more from Man, than Man from Beast~ Rochester
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro~ HST
Man differs more from Man, than Man from Beast~ Rochester
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro~ HST