Show at Bowser Brewery

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Yikes 

Bowser Brewery, the reckoning.
Holy moly, three hour set? Some places make you play 5 hours, most musicians barely have an hour of material
Mine to fret,
pet,
and even get. I like how youre excited about it without actually saying it, greedy it's mine! Happy to even get it, even if I don't like the rhyme on get, get seems either too important or too forced

Awesome I say with a grin on my face;
"Breweries are the place where my guitar is mace.".like a dangerous weapon stay back you can't touch me, but I think music is more inviting than what mace connotates I picture girls being mugged in alleys

Keeping on talking ill get ten percent!this is confusing, you keep talking, audience, venue promoter? 10 percent of payout?
Who know where all this time has went? I don't know

Money, ahh the green smoke.
Burn 5 dollars, then money becomes,
a seeming insensitive joke.I like the relation to burning money and green smoke, but as a joke I don't get how its insensitive

My offering to you and me,
green smoke for everyone to see!so you get the money? Then burn it back to the people?  

Music for every budget,
music for every friend;
music for every budget.why this repeat

Wednesday nights at Bowser!
Again and again.I like it cause it's true here, again and again, Wednesday nights, or Tuesday nights, always same people with same stuff, but this takes away from the excitement you seemed to have at the beginning about getting the show, now it almost sounds like complaining to see a show.

I think this could make a funny song stabbing at the industry, or celebrating it, not sure in context which way it went