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01-18-2017, 12:29 PM

(01-18-2017, 08:25 AM)Achebe Wrote: The double simile in he last line is the only rough patch in an otherwise perfect piece

Are you talking about 'fly' and then 'down'? Cause flying is usually associated with upward or lateral motion? Sorry, confused. Undecided

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Losing Stick - by Lizzie - 01-18-2017, 07:05 AM

RE: Losing Stick - by Achebe - 01-18-2017, 08:25 AM

RE: Losing Stick - by Lizzie - 01-18-2017, 12:29 PM

RE: Losing Stick - by Achebe - 01-18-2017, 01:58 PM

RE: Losing Stick - by Lizzie - 01-19-2017, 03:10 AM

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