Inheritance - Edit
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Inheritance


When he was five, young Gerald’s father spanked
him angrily for playing near the edge,
tormenting animals, and most of all
for toying with himself.  Young Gerald learned
what things were right and wrong, and soon forgot
those loving pains and terrors that had taught
him which was which.  At thirty-three his shrink
recovered memories that showed his angst was caused
by rage and anger, violent abuse
his father had inflicted on a son
he hated.  Gerald took it all to heart
and never punished his son Ted except
with smiling time-outs.  No-one could explain
why Ted turned out sadistic and depraved,
thrill-seeking and amoral - unafraid
of playing near the edge.  Old Gerald thought
this vicious streak must be inherited:
Ted’s grandfather, he told himself, was mad.


When he was five young Gerald’s father spanked
him angrily for playing near the edge,
tormenting animals, and most of all
for toying with himself.  Young Gerald learned
what things were right and wrong, and soon forgot
those loving pains and terrors that had taught
him which was which.  At thirty-three his shrink
informed him that his fear of heights was caused
by rage and anger, violent abuse
his father had inflicted on a son
he hated.  Gerald took it all to heart
and never punished his son Ted except
with smiling time-outs.  No-one could explain
why Ted turned out sadistic and depraved,
thrill-seeking and amoral - unafraid
of playing near the edge.  Old Gerald thought
it had to be inherited somehow -
Ted’s grandfather, as he recalled, was bad.

A little blank verse - have to get a bit of strikebreaking in before the "Poets' Strike" is over!
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Inheritance - Edit - by dukealien - 01-16-2017, 01:23 PM
RE: Inheritance - by Cousin Kil - 01-17-2017, 08:15 AM
RE: Inheritance - by dukealien - 01-17-2017, 11:02 PM
RE: Inheritance - by Carrie Birdsong - 01-19-2017, 10:42 AM
RE: Inheritance - by BecktheDog - 01-20-2017, 01:08 AM
RE: Inheritance - by RiverNotch - 01-20-2017, 12:55 PM
RE: Inheritance - Edit - by dukealien - 01-22-2017, 12:01 PM
RE: Inheritance - Edit - by Brownlie - 01-26-2017, 05:18 PM



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